Social diversity

In my opinion social diversity is very important, because if there weren’t social diversity we would have the same culture, the same religion, the same food... Also we couldn’t study the different history that his religion has like in the musulman religion.

I think the things you said are good, because all it’s true. But you write a few things, the next time write a little more.
Nice work!

All the content you said is true, and I agree with it. But you could speak a bit more, as it’s a theme that has lots of things to discuss.
Even though, great job!